Strange House
One day while I was walking in my neighborhood I saw a strange house. I decided to go in side this house because I wanted to see what this house is in side. I saw many big trees. I was feeling afraid when I went to in side. I listened scare from the house but I didn’t know who was scared.
When I was listening scare I saw some ghost. They were wear white dress. They were very scary. When I was seeing the ghost the door closed but I didn't now who closed the door. I tryed to scamper from the ghost but I can't. Suddenly, the ghost were darkling and I did't liseten any sound.
Finally, I went out this house. When I walking to out the scare started again and I runed to out. After that, I told my friends about this house.
Don't feel afraid when you reading this story.
Bo Nooof
posted by Nawaf at 8:12 PM
1 Comments:
Well, I felt a little scared while reading the story. But I'm OK now. :)
Maybe it was the ghost of an SMC English teacher screaming?
Another good piece of writing - but you might want to go back and check your simple past tense verbs (e.g. run, can). Also I think you want SCREAM not "scare".
Thanks!
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